Truth — Tianren

Truth

 

One plus one,

Equals two.

It is, and always is.

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To Myself — Tianren

To Myself

 

Woke up in the morning,

The alarm was ringing;

Once again, overslept,

Class started, teacher annoyed;

Free of ado, lying on the bed,

I smiled, with eyes closed:

“Hereafter happy shall I be.”

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Contradiction defines New York City — Tianren

Contradiction defines New York City

Contradiction defines New York City,

The wild tentacles stretch further,

While civilized men are walking in frenzy.

 

Everything bears a shade of gray,

Yet in its heart lies a patch of green,

Contradiction defines New York City,

 

City cleaners are working crazy,

The smug trash is flying high,

While civilized men are walking in frenzy.

 

Time Square is flashing, striping atrocity,

The rich become heroes, the poor cracks,

Contradiction defines New York City,

 

How happy is it to be living in the city!

Tipsy chumps chant that out loud,

While civilized men are walking in frenzy.

 

Not a good place to be a gagger of lolly,

But it produces so many lollygaggers,

Contradiction defines New York City,

While civilized men are walking in frenzy.

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Ode to A Parted Love — Tianren

Ode to A Parted Love

It is such beauty as the blossoming flower,

People always say, in every sprightly spring.

To embrace it never shall we cower,

As flowers are not scared by the sun dazzling.

They bloom, with charm, careless like a vower,

Who avers perpetuity as something promising.

Beauteous they naturally are, yet what power,

Makes their beauty unnatural, and everlasting?

 

The seen beauty is transient, but the unseen,

Visits us so oft, bearing the same lingering scent,

Sweet as a lover’s woe, as memories to redeem.

May it for ever within our mind be locked.

And our imagination, which allows us to dream,

Marches dauntlessly to the far distant,

Mirage that lies faithfully in its scheme.

No time to recede, and no need to repent.

 

In the end the blossoms are fated to fade,

But through which beauty we have once met.

With the breeze of time, the petals do shed,

And dance in the air, like fire, reluctant to die out.

But they renders their beauty unspoiled,

Redolent of the bygone, which we oft tout.

Such is the power of love that it marked,

On all of us, a stigma of a life intact.

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Mad Girl’s Love Song

I found the villanelles very powerful. The repetition in the 2nd, 4th, and 6th stanzas and in the 1st, 3rd, 5th, and 6th stanzas seemed perfectly spaced so as to not forget about the line, but not have it dominate the poem. I found this effect especially powerful in “Mad Girl’s Love Song” because the line (I think I made you up inside my head) gives a less significant connotation to the line, almost as if the author is doubting what he’s saying. But with the repetition, we can see that the author partly believes what he’s saying. To me it seems that the author knows this girl is imagination but doesn’t want to admit it. But then when he says, I shut my eyes and the world drops dead, we can see that this girl is all he’s thinking about. So when shuts his eyes and thinks about her, nothing matters in the world around him anymore.

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Reaction to Villanelles – Sarah

In case you couldn’t guess, Plath’s “Mad Girl’s Love Song” was my favorite of the four villanelles that we read. I personally enjoy repetition in poetry; I think it often adds passion to a piece because, similar to what Zach commented, it portrays something that the author/speaker just cannot get off of their mind. I think it’s quite obvious that the phrases repeated throughout a villanelle are used to depict the meaning of the poem itself but I do think that it’s necessary to bring up as that’s pretty much the appeal of the style. The format of the villanelle allows for a lot of emotion, which is the thing that draws me to poetry the most, so I thoroughly enjoy the style.

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Villanelle Reactions

Personally, I fully enjoyed “Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night”, “If I Could Tell You”,  and “Mad Girl’s Love Song”.  Each of these Villanelles have a catchy rhythm that is easy to follow based on the rhyme scheme and repetition of important lines. The three villanelles listed above felt more personal than the “Double Villanelle” and were easily relatable due to the consistent use of “I” and “we”. The repetition of a symbolic line at the end of each stanza helps to remind the reader of the larger picture and the deeper meaning. The rhyme scheme and repetition create a serious tone that suggests the romance of time, love, death, and life. My favorite of the four is “If I Could Tell You” because it suggests conflict between the known and the unknown through contrast of the present and the future. I find that the significance of the “Double Villanelle” is harder to decipher which made it a more frustrating read.

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Reaction to Villanelles- Zach

The villanelle, purely due to its general form, automatically provides a tone of power and significance. It is much like how the I-V-vi-IV chord progression weaves through much of pop music, giving emotional weight to songs, regardless of their other aspects. I find that the Thomas, Plath, and Auden poems particularly create an eerie mood. Perhaps it’s their serious themes, as opposed to Wilde’s general lightheartedness. But more convincing is that the repetition on its own brings to mind an insane person repeating thoughts continuously, obsessed with a single idea that prevents him or her from seeing the broader context of his or her life. Wilde’s villanelle, on the other hand, uses repetition to present a beseeching of a god, which also upon further reflection brings me a similar sense of eeriness, due to my association of prayer with helplessness.

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Reaction to Villanelles – Alana

What I liked about the villanelles is that they were straightforward in meaning and style. By that I mean it was easy to follow along because the structure was very concise, and the repetition allowed me to understand the meaning continuously throughout the poem. Each villanelle was structured to have six stanzas, each having three lines while the last stanza had four. I found it more enjoyable to follow this structure and I could understand the pattern of the poem this way. Each time the last line of the first and second stanza was repeated, it put emphasis on the topic of the poem and tied it all together in the end. Overall I like the style of villanelles because unlike some other forms of poetry, this one is very organized and the meaning doesn’t get lost.

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Down Under

You weigh heavy on struggling bushy brows

While my muscles bend in cascading waves.

Through blurred lines I try to make sense of now

As all fighting sensible reason fades.

 

Your power trembles unawakening

As all fear bends to your relentless hand.

I beg you for a taste of the golden

Visions inherited at your command.

 

Through endless time you have learned to evade

Those who desire your comforting caress

For at your hand all anguish is forbade

In a great escape of wild weightlessness.

 

Let me feel your sweet serenity

and play fool to your mortal luxury.

 

 

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