Ethan,
If you and Oliver are to sing this together, I need to see both of your faces and hear both of your voices. I really appreciate your enthusiasm with this song, but I can’t really hear Oliver 🙂
I noticed that you did an excellent job with the last four stanzas. However you skipped a lot of words in the first two stanzas. I think you just need to practice a bit more, but you are on the right track!.
I think you guys should put background music.
You guys sings well. More emotion in the song will be much more great.
Nice reading, you should do some gestures
Ethan,
If you and Oliver are to sing this together, I need to see both of your faces and hear both of your voices. I really appreciate your enthusiasm with this song, but I can’t really hear Oliver 🙂
I noticed that you did an excellent job with the last four stanzas. However you skipped a lot of words in the first two stanzas. I think you just need to practice a bit more, but you are on the right track!.